Revised: Chapter 7
I re-wrote most of chapter 7. If you'd like to read the revisions, I just edited that post instead of re-posting it.
I think this works much better and gives a stronger impression of who Pooka is. Plus it's a more solid foundation to build his character on in future chapters. I am most pleased.
I think this works much better and gives a stronger impression of who Pooka is. Plus it's a more solid foundation to build his character on in future chapters. I am most pleased.
Labels: Hero+Factor, revisions
